nice work pall but ill tell u somethings here
the hats at the begining are dirty, looks like they where low by origine and u just pump up the volume on them so that u can hear it but the result: they r dirty and crispy and not pure, so just to let u know bro, they are different types of hats and or snares and or cymbals, not all of them can be used 'naked' to Emphasize the Treble part, wat i mean by naked is that u can just use it as it to be the treble, u should edit it if its not well shaped and moduled...
Now another thing is that the song has no ''heart'' no Main Theme, i was there listening and after the minutes 2 i start wondering, where is the main theme? until the minute 5 all i was hearing is melodys and some keys works, if those are the heart of the songs, its too weak and not rich at all, work on them more, if thats how u want them to be then create a theme bro, there is no story in the song, its just like looping beats and melodys that uplifts thrue the time.....
am sorry if am too picky or commenting so hard but that is the truth, i just want ur work to be perfect or at least well done and appreciated by professional ears.
that track for me is not finished yet, it needs a lot of work on the structure and over the final mixdown for the sounds quality.
if you need any help or have any questions ill help as much as my knowledge in music production is wide habibi.
ma tez3al menneh
ana i heard a LOT of bad comments when i first used to let the people hear my works w kenet ez3al shway but right now i know enno those people who used to comment badly and or give advices were totaly right and all these lead me to be now able to do a track that has no mistakes in structure > music type > sound quality > and even vocals, what i am still workin on is on the technical parts because i am not really able yet to put my ideas alive and to paste my melody dreams into that shiny circular shape...
anyway, am talking too much now
ill let go right here,
cheers.
