Haroon - Track 3

[haroon]

Hey hows it goin!

I've just finished working on a track, and I'm hoping to get some feedback off you.

Here's the link..



Thx and Cheers!

[Nicktalopia]

Alright since you asked for a feedback here it is.
For an amateur giving production a shot,it isn't that horrible.
But if you were looking for producer's attention or i duno a radio station playing it then you're still way behind,for a lot of reasons.

The track has a very noisy start,the patterns do no blend as they're supposed to,if it was meant to be a Trance track then you're missing the whole point,trance to some percentage needs math to sound right,4,16 beats equation,and a solid beats intro is needed to make your tune sound as perfect as the tracks you hear on big radio shows,still not considering what the track is built out of,just the structure is weak and miss-matched from the start to the middle followed till the end.
To get the unique sound you need a unique sound bank to work on,or try building your own,public sound samples cant give you a rich single.

Another thing is that i don't get why what sounded like Acid Guitar suddenly struck into the track without any leveling or even a semi lower sound to prepare it's entrance.

(I know Arabs take things to heart but I'm not criticizing just giving honest remarks.)
Nice try for a starter.
Would love to check another track or a modified version of this one.

[haroon]

niksterx,

Thx for your remarks.. dunno if the track can be classified as trance... but its an experimental track, like you pointed out, sometimes there are no build ups of a synth or a particular sound.. and yeah, the starting is a complete contrast to the main body of the track.. that was intentional.

Well, my ears are tuned a lot of genres, breaks, psy trance, metal... prolly someone who has an ear for the mentioned genres would think differently about the structure... coz I've had people and producers appreciate the structure of the track.

Agreed, it's not a pro track, there are sounds that need to be added, and mastering is left. But I doubt i'd change the structure entirely.

Lets get more feedback on it.

Thx again niksterx Cheers!

[Proof]

Gave this a listen.

I'll probably agree completely with Nicktalopia. You do have a lot of genres influenced ... but combining them is a really tough and creative processes. The kicks sound as though they're off a 'hardcore' track ... the fx sounds "Prodigy" style. The vocals could use a better delay that fades smoother. Anyway ...

I wouldn't know how to fix this (if needed) ... except to filter it out and make a good mix out of it (eg: giving each instrument their own EQ bandwidth, so it wouldn't mask anything else unnecessarily).

[haroon]

thx Praveen... appreciate your comments, the sounds need some compression and some bandwidth and fx changes.. and yeah, ur right, the vocals will sound good with a better delay..

cheers